Sep 2, 2009

14 comments:

ThomG said...

this has a post-apocalyptic feel to it. I like it.

Just someone said...

Nice read! Great use of the promt!

Just someone said...

Nice read! Great use of the promt!

Sepiru Chris said...

I'm with Thom, although I must confess that "howling murmurs" trips me up with a bit of cognitive dissonance.

I have to think about that pairing; I must be missing something.

gautami tripathy said...

I am hating the summer!

it was not a dream, certainly not a memory

Americanising Desi said...

i could see the luster on my palm :O

The Glare of Threat

very vivid!

Lucy said...

luster of a tiny raindrop
so sweetly done.

Stan Ski said...

Lead me to the oasis.

Sweetest in the Gale said...

Oh wow, such wonderful visual imagery! This was lovely.

Andy Sewina said...

I do like this, there's a lovely build up here.

I just wonder if the change of tense on 'fell' was intentional, I would have used 'falls', anyhow, great use of the prompt.

maglomaniac said...

And I am enjoying it even more coz ryt now m feeling the luster of tiny raindrops from my window.

I am sorry my baby

~Harsha

asleeponmyfeet said...

Indian summer?

pjd said...

ghostly and hellish... that raindrop feels more like a drop of sweat to me.

Tumblewords: said...

Nicely visual and strongly worded...

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