My entry for 3WW
languish of fierce storms
velocity of ferocious winds
the intensity mellows down
the high tides, quietens their pace
the full eclipse, crosses its prime
the darkness, fades away in a whisker
peace emerges and prevails
the canoe gently floats,
bound the horizon, reflecting
bright red rays of evening sun
stillness of the vast ocean
sinusoidal effects of life
Sep 23, 2009
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Sinusoid of life.
I very much agree to the same.
It is these extremes that keep life ticking that you have captured so nicely.
A stormy weather has to give place to a placid mood.
an eye for an eye makes the whole world blind
~Harsha
This truly explains life's calm seas, it's fierce storms. Nicely done.
Nice work! I especially like 'fades away in a whisker'. It adds to the abstract/reality of the piece.
the darkness, fades away in a whisker
I love this line! Well done!
I love the elegance you have used to show us what the seas are truly like.
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Sinusoid effects of life - well said!
Liked the theme..Sinusoidal effects of life..Nice work..!!
:)
This is good!
let my poemlette take you on
Storm/calm, ebb/flow... life is all about opposing forces acting and reacting to each other. Nicely done.
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