Sep 23, 2009

sinusoid

My entry for 3WW

languish of fierce storms
velocity of ferocious winds
the intensity mellows down

the high tides, quietens their pace
the full eclipse, crosses its prime
the darkness, fades away in a whisker

peace emerges and prevails
the canoe gently floats,
bound the horizon, reflecting

bright red rays of evening sun
stillness of the vast ocean
sinusoidal effects of life

9 comments:

maglomaniac said...

Sinusoid of life.
I very much agree to the same.
It is these extremes that keep life ticking that you have captured so nicely.
A stormy weather has to give place to a placid mood.

an eye for an eye makes the whole world blind

~Harsha

ThomG said...

This truly explains life's calm seas, it's fierce storms. Nicely done.

Tumblewords: said...

Nice work! I especially like 'fades away in a whisker'. It adds to the abstract/reality of the piece.

Linda Jacobs said...

the darkness, fades away in a whisker

I love this line! Well done!

wordvamp said...

I love the elegance you have used to show us what the seas are truly like.

http://wordvamp.wordpress.com/2009/09/23/an-offering-for-death/

Just someone said...

Sinusoid effects of life - well said!

Vinz said...

Liked the theme..Sinusoidal effects of life..Nice work..!!

:)

gautami tripathy said...

This is good!

let my poemlette take you on

asleeponmyfeet said...

Storm/calm, ebb/flow... life is all about opposing forces acting and reacting to each other. Nicely done.
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