My contribution to Writer's Island prompt - The moment
A sunny morning
an anxious beginning
Will I get through?
to be part of software crew
To make myself stand out
prayers chanted loud,
Shutting down other choices
Ruling out external noises
The deciding moment
no room to repent,
heart pumps fast
adrenalin flows aghast
no reason to sob,
I got my first job
The offer is mine,
pay myself to dine
freedom to stand
on my own feet,
the turning point
a memorable feat
A sunny morning
an anxious beginning
Will I get through?
to be part of software crew
To make myself stand out
prayers chanted loud,
Shutting down other choices
Ruling out external noises
The deciding moment
no room to repent,
heart pumps fast
adrenalin flows aghast
no reason to sob,
I got my first job
The offer is mine,
pay myself to dine
freedom to stand
on my own feet,
the turning point
a memorable feat
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7 comments:
I like the way you used one 'moment' and the emotions it carried with it til the end. Nice!
There is a certain thrill as I read this piece with anticipations building up. You sound excited when you wrote this, your voice excites the reader in effect sharing your great moment.
I wish you well.
~ Jeques
Here's a link to my winning moments:
http://jeques.wordpress.com/2007/12/11/1sts-9-publication/
oh anu... this was beautiful,, both in word and sentiment... i just loved it!!!!
Oh yeah, the first job is always exhilarating...beautiful moment well potrayed, welcome to WI..thanks.
UL
Very beautiful expressed that important moment which brings freedom as you said
It's wonderful to use such an old medium in such a modern way
courting destiny
You summed up the Moment perfectly. Here's hoping you come back to the Island next week.
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